This is an essay I wrote for a school assignment. I love to write, and really enjoyed writting this essay! I think this is one of my best essays ever and is definitely my favorite! I truly love horses, especially my favorite girl down at the NHSPCA Scarlet! I hope when you read this, you can see why horses are so special to me! ~Declan
Scarlet
By Declan Gregg
The horse is a wonderful, mysterious creature. Horses are so wonderful because you can form
a connection with them and have an exciting relationship with them. I love to visit my local shelter and visit
the horses. I have one favorite, and her
name is Scarlet. I love to lie down and
watch her trot around in the hot sun. I
also like to rub her and groom her.
When I visit Scarlet, I hear her hooves pounding. They sound like thunder boldly booming and
cannons firing swiftly down to earth. I
hear a whinny and see her prance around in the beautiful sparkling sand on the
ground. She snorts as she flicks her
tail as fast as lightening in a great storm!
When I look at her I feel wonderful and want to be with her. I hear her snort happily as I feed her
treats.
I smell that wild and free, good smelling scent, as I caress
her glossy mane. I see her beauty as she
runs and the sun gloriously reflects off her hind legs. I think if God made anything more beautiful
and glorious he would have kept it for himself.
As I smell the treats I give to her, my nose scrunches up at the
delectable smell. I see her graceful
head as she takes a drink of the new, fresh, and clean water I just gave
her. I also hear the loud slurps as she
gulps down some of the water. Then she
looks at me, and seems to be saying “more, more, more!” I laugh and rub her smooth back as she eats.
I watch her rip up the grass as if she is ripping paper, and
imagine it might taste bitter and maybe a little dull. I see Scarlet eat hay, and I imagine it might
taste like hard spaghetti. It makes me
want to eat seeing Scarlet eat. I want
to eat a big, juicy, lovely shade of orange clementine!
I love Scarlet and wish she was my horse. She is so great! I would love to be a horse, and be her
brother! It would be so awesome to be a
horse. It would be a piece of heaven to
be a horse. Horses are a joy to be with
any time. I feel a glorious feeling, like joy rushing
into my heart when I am with a horse! I
hope I can have a horse of my own one day.
She is a real beauty indeed Declan, and even though you don't have a horse of your own right now, I know you are happy that you have Scarlet in your life, and I am most sure she is happy to have you in her life. Do you know how they came to name her Scarlet? I was thinking maybe after the high-strung heroine of "Gone with the Wind" fame, but she was Scarlett with two "t"s!
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ReplyDeleteDear Declan, Scarlet is a very lucky horse to have such a smart, responsible and loving person - you - in her life. And I enjoyed reading your feelings about the specialness of horses. I think they are God's most beautiful animals. Wanting a horse is understandable. Having one is hard sometimes, but a very worthy goal. God bless you and your great big heart. Please keep writing.
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